by charlieflemming
Fantastic story. My dream as a young man was to have a mom, daughter, son threeway. I had to settle for my little sister but we talked about getting mom into the mix. Keep writing like this. Hmmmm...I may call my sister now.
I would not open the story with the βpunchlineβ, and then back up to flesh out the backstory. But this is super hot, with the ever escalating action!
2k for all the pussy he wants from 2 women? cheap as hell...considering what wives cost...well above 2k per month...for 1 fuck a week if you're lucky.
"close" the door vs take your "clothes" off and fuck. it reads like a non-experienced kid wrote this and that makes it unbelievable. after the first few times the 19 year old boy should have developed some control and not cum after fucking and then pull out and fuck again and cum in two minutes and no human body can cum every time you suggest it takes time to reuid the supply take a course in reality
Was kinda hoping Mom would eventually give him all his money back. Thought she might just be using that as a ruse to seduce her son. But no, she's really prostituting herself. Also, you did that thing where the sister/daughter joins in for no good reason - other than being horny.
I certainly didn't hate this story, but I can't say I loved it, either. 3*
Lost me right from the beginning of the story when the mom called herself a shut! I rated this story one star. Such a good idea too, it's a shame
Congratulations on an excellent erotic romp. This reads like an erotic Brian Did farce.
A fantasy no doubt but an extremely erotic one. Gave 5 for it. The idea of Mom prostituting herself a little more each payday was new and way out exciting. Of course it's a fiction because it is impossible for any human male to remain hard and ejaculating throughout the day. Only rabbits can.
Good, but the math was wrong. They were at 150 for blowjobs, plus 25 for 69 (175), then he says 150 more (325) will put him at 150 a week. 500-325 is not 150.