All Comments on 'Helping My Brother'

It is your story. I trust u. I’m in lust over how you write. Sooo real. I will wait for you my sweet to bring this story forward. Can’t wait. Yum

Is she dead?

WTF happened.

Nicely written, with enough inner dialogue to help the story be believable and human.

The lead up, the foreplay and consummation was very well done, reminding me of how the best sex has happened in my life, not intentionally but being discovered and becoming a wonderful journey for both of us. I don’t have an interest in doing it with my sister, but I’d definitely love experiencing that with someone who is an unexpected lover and have it turn out to be explosive for us both.

I love hat she is honest with herself in the end

The female character is referred to as Lisa once in the first page. Is it really that hard to maintain continuity for such a short story? Regardless, it's just a minor complaint in an otherwise excellent tale.

Pyro650

Excellent, any way you take this would work. A little or a lot, she obviously enjoyed it to the point she would want more.

Really....just bring in another woman for the sex because Suzanna is being a selfish bitch

LOVED IT...CINCO ESTRELLAS!

I see there is a Chapter 2...Sssooo glad you have written more...Chapters 3 &4 also, I think.

Started slow, nice...and the feelings Sara has for her brother...she is right, every person we couple with leaves a part in us, changes us...I am a guy, and I will tell you, even guys feel it...of one does not feel it, you are insensitive and a sociopath!

Such love, shared in Such a touching way, both wanted it...more, more!!

This story really hits home, living in a sexless marriage myself. I don't have anyone in my life that would care about me enough to be there for me in that way though. I'm alone with my wife in our house where we rarely talk anymore and never touch other than the little peck kiss goodbye when one of us leaves the house. I am Nick, but with nobody else to comfort me in my loneliness.

Loved it

Think about bringing in her husband and then approaching his wife or withdrawing support for his wife

Good premise.

Needed more teasing.

Needed her asking him how often he jerked off.

What did he think about when he was masturbating?

Did he watch porn? What kind?

Had he ever thought about her while he masturbated? If so, what did he imagine doing to her? Having her do to him? If not, what kind of girls did he think about? What were their bodies like? Big tits? Small tits? Like hers?

Not nearly as erotic as your Sarah stories for instance.

Four stars.

A threesome to thaw out his icy wife perhaps?

I lost my MIND reading your story. Never have I ever thought about having sex with my brother and, okay: ick. But your story was both so sweet and so d-mn hot at the same time! D-mn! ... Did I mention I lost my mind reading your story? *whew*

Well, I DO like pussy hair so keep it. :-)

Pity fucks are such sad stories.

Amazing introspection and self-evaluation.

I have kept my bush as my husband and my younger brother love it. I discovered that my younger brother has our dad's manly cock, except that my brother's is circumcised. But, both have a huge purple head. And, I got mom's big beautiful breasts with her large pink areola and pointy pink nipples. My brother and I saw each other as children without clothing. But, it didn't mean anything then. In our thirties and forties, circumstances drew us together, and we had our eyes opened to the wonder of each other. The passion, the tingles, the wetness, the way his cock filled me deep and wide to give the most astounding orgasms. The revelation that he had fantasized about me in his teens, his hunger for my nipples. I opened my legs as wide as I could for him and he saw the hair and wide open rose petals that he had lusted after and dreamed about, then licked me to a screaming orgasm, and then he worked his manhood deep into me so that I almost lost my breath, and I squeezed his cock with my muscles until he nearly fainted. His cock sliding along my wet slippery pussy walls was so intense. We are like a lock and key. We fit.

I liked your story. But maybe you should end it with her waking up next to her husband and it all being a fantasy. That way she doesn't live with guilt and shame nor does he.

His wife is a dick for making such an impactful decision without any sort of actual discussion with her husband. Yes, he isn’t entitled to sex with her, but it’s still a pretty fundamental foundation of a relationship and should at minimum be a discussion of other policy will suddenly be no sex ever