All Comments on 'Helping My Brother'

More than just a quick thrust. I liked the mental side to it.

Oh my god.... I what a GREAT STORY!!!!!!! I THE BEST ONE I have ever read!!!!!! I WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

In my opinion, bringing in a cousin, looking past the brother's needs, or adding anything about the rather many males in the family, will ONLY adulterate the uniqueness of this uplifting story of heroism. We already know that the sister has given herself up and the brother in all appreciation has taken her. It is not rocket science to know that they will test the new boat in future, and that the breakfast dates will continue and lead into 'primal' need satisfication. To me, it is a complete stand alone masterpiece. LEAVE THIS STORY ALONE.

I do not think our ideas can improve on this story. This almost feels like a confession of something that really took place. You do a FINE job on your own. Looking forward to more.5+

I agree with the other comments that your ideas are excellent, so just keep writing. And just to let you know I think Sara is SOOOOOOO hot!

This is truly the best and most erotic story I have ever read. Keep it going. You are a good writer, you don't need anyone elses advice on your storyline.

This story is not only incredibly sexy, it is very well written. I have never been moved to comment on a story before. Very, very good.

This was really good. I *love* the distinct narrative style, the psychological angst and philisophical commentary blended with a raw yet tender physicality. Just enough of a balance between description and diaologue without "revealing" through narrative. Great story telling.

Sara breaks down the frigid wife & then 3 somes her for brother. " tres amantes dichosos no dichosos no tienen fin ni muerte" ,

Trans:'3 happy lovers without an ending or death' . Oh yes, I would LOVE it if the wife was of Latin origin. THANKS though for this story & the rest of your sterling body of work.

Yes! A day on the beach - and who cares about the bikini - swim nude!! Get sand in her pussy, and fuck anyway!! A real orgy!!

I absolutely loved this story and would very much like you to continue with this story by adding more chapters!

His Sex toy = Yes!!!!

mmm break out the yellow bikini! ;)

Another great one from da MAN. Been looking forward to part2 of "sister chat".

Good start of promising tale, hope you will develop tale of affair with sex, desire, release for bro and sis. Interesting how they hide/act in front of family.

You asked for some feedback. I think, the second story should be told from the brother's point of view. Maybe he should be having the same issues with his feelings as the sister is. I like the idea of them spending the day at the beach together, really like the idea of him taking her doggie-style on the sand. :) So, it was a really enjoyable piece, can't wait for more.

Really liked it, and am glad you are posting stories again.

a delightful tale.

very well told. i enjoyed the detailu could feel the pashion from the story