All Comments on 'Helping My New Neighbor'

I guess in your fantasy world, washer cycles and dryer cycles only take a couple of minutes. More realism please.

I do understand the workings of washers & dryers, a short cycle on newer model washer most times is about 20 minutes, the delicate cycle on a dryer is anywhere from20 to 30 minutes. Both depend of course on the clothing being washed. Though I try to go into great detail, at times probably to much, I may take a liberty or two while writing.

The dialogue doesn't quite flow. Certain words are over used -- pleasure, please, etc. It's a very process, step-by-step story. You can probably condense about 20% of this and not lose a thing. Nice effort, though. Good luck.

My goodness - Washers and Dryers when you have a Redhead astraddle you and rubbing you off?

Well, AI do ask for feedback. And realism is very important to many.

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Your story is very arousing and you are doing fine ! Please write more chapters, so we can see what Lisa has in mind and how you respond :) Thanks.

Very nicely done. When I take my time with a story, I like to weave in bits of reality without making them a novel so I appreciate the pacing that you took. You could probably go further with the descriptions as you build toward the action, but the premise was very sexy. The description of Lisa working her body against him was very powerful. I could imagine full breasts stroking me... well, it was very erotic. Well done and hope you do more. Sissy Tales

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