All Comments on 'Helter Skelter'

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Wouldn't think a parole violator, especially a weapons violation, would be out of jail.

Another good, funny story from HDK.

Poor story,Jim deserves all he is going to get for not divorcing her straight away.

I like it. His wife should get a big laugh out of it.

Still laughing! Great Story.

I loved that his ideas all came to bite him in the butt. Sometimes, my problems come from attaching myself to the first person character, and , as he veers off the noble path, sometimes I am guilty of rejecting the idea that THIS IS JuST FICTION. But , as this is so masterful, I followed right along into his neighbors bedroom, and was as surprised as he was by the husband turning his revenge on him. Genius !

And wonderfull read, made my day!!!!!

Can't understand how anyone could think this was a good story,it doesn't even have an ending.

why did not divorce?

He has No plan....

Cheaters deserve whatever they get

That you are the best!

That really was very good. It was different, took a new approach to the problem, and the ending was mighty dark. Good job.

Funny - 5*

A.little harder to follow than the usual HDK work, but worth a second read.

That is f...ing hilarious.

>>Sleeping with a woman is better than sleeping alone;

>>that is if she isn't sleeping with anyone else!

Your sense of humor is something else. 5 stars.

I think his wife set him up, since acted exactly like he did.

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Jack COULD have been a coincidence, but I think not, with him appearing on the exact weekend that his wife having the seminar that set up the tryst.

You have a nasty sense of humor nice work

He’s dreaming. Right? <grin>

A burn the husband story, don’t see to many of those around here, good job HDK, you’ve got quite the imagination, and sense of humor. Your one of a kind, thank you. KS

Hey, turnabouts fair play!

The story is good with much humor. I liked it till Sandy appeared but then it went crazy.

Now that’s funny 😂🤣 5 stars ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

What a hypocritical prat. Two wrongs do not make it right.

FTDS….!

4⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Just wanted a ‘complete ending’.

Yes; We can all guess - sure enjoyed the beginning, middle …. and ….

What a fucking cluster fuck of a story not because parts weren't funny but the ending made literally no sense?

This is a funny story.

I can't decide if I hate it or love it - therefore only 4 stars.

But .... I do like the twist, when Jack was waiting for him at his home in the end.

De most mi lett a vége!? Így az egésznek semmi értelme,csak egy nagy nulla írás!' 1 csillag!

Great, all the way to the ending, where the bad guy wins.

This was a real clunker, as reflected in the score. Either Jack was released from prison and contacted a not really contrite Gwen who conspired with Sandy and Ed to put this plan together; or it was purely coincidence, which is so unlikely as to be from the Twilight Zone or the Outer Limits, not erotic fantasy.

The ending was horrible,I thought the cheated husband was going to win back his manhood.The disrespect,betrayal the righteous revenge. Only to know Jack figured out who set him up.involve two married people for retaliation.Did the cheating wife knew about this? Is she that evil? The cheated husband doesn't win! Mr. Hard Day's Night take Helter Skelter and redo it over.Not demanding just asking politely please.

Unfinished.

Great ending. Wonderful twist.

Sucks to be Jim, guess he overthought his revenge?

Fkin stupid

Sorry but I am confused. She cheat with Jack and a neighbor named Ed. catches him in bed with a wife named Sandy and uses the very same language that he used with Jack ? What the h--- is going on ?

Well, this was just dumb. I've read some stinkers by this writer, and this one ranks right up there.

Oh I was laughing at the end of this, nice story, well thought out

He should have used what Jack had made in a divorce.

Kind of reminds me of the Little Abner cartoon strip.