by Alexis_East
She does seem to think ass play is good so you need to start dicking her big butt and yanking on her nipples. Make that big booty bang!
Interesting that you tried it from the male point of view. I think you nailed his "voice."
Utterly superb writing. I enjoy bigger women (albeit older than your young lady) and could relate to your wonderful description of her thick body. The sex was sublime and got me so hard. Please write more with these characters, you have a rare gift for crafting very authentic, horny erotica.
I thought your story was great. Well written. Nicely paced. Sexy. Just what literotica should be. More stories please. You have talent. And ignore Anonymous and his big butt interests. Write what feels good to you. Then it will feel real to us.