All Comments on 'Her Book'

I mean, please... This is amateurish.

Look at some of the words: "lude"act? (I think you meant "lewd.")

His "quite little friend"? A couple of instances of misspelling the word "quiet." And the winner is: "As they lay next to each other catching there breathe" - I won't even comment.

Let's not even mention the shifting tense, past to present to past.

And the shame of it all: it's a fair concept, an idea worth exploring.

Get an editor! Let's get this baby cleaned up.

So, you spelled a couple of words wrong. That just makes it seem like a real person is telling a real story.