All Comments on 'Her Boyfriend really is Bisexual'
by speedodave
- 7 Comments
kafover 5 years agoConfusing and boring.
Do some proof reading and get an editor. So many errors.
"I could see Kip's sister being exacerbated by this morons response." makes no sense at all. A person cannot be exacerbated. And it should be "moron's". You don't understand possessives, do you?
Just one meaningless sentence among others.
speedodaveover 5 years agoAuthorOK guys, I have finished this off as well as I could recall what happened.
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Dave
speedodaveover 5 years agoAuthorOK guys, I have finished this off as well as I could recall what happened.
Writing about my experiences is what I do for a living and it takes a stack of time so if you want to read it, it is available on my site www.SpeedoFetish.com
I know that will piss some of you off, but, if you really like it, it is a whole $4.95 to join and there is a shit tonne of porn in there.
If you join you'll read all my stories as well.
Dave
Anonymousover 5 years agoI had given you a 5 for a good start before I read that you wanted to charge to read the rest. You just lost me as a reader
eye_of_the_dragon5 months agostarted out with some good potential, but then to advertise to charge people to read more, is total crap.
