All Comments on 'Her Brother'

this was, like you said, a cliché story but, luckily, i'm a sucker for clichés and this has become one of my favourite stories yet — a hot, erotic, slow-burn taboo romance, one that's considered forbidden, it's delectable. but your descriptions; those were the cherry on the top. i noticed this is your first story on here, and we welcome you with open arms because this is fucking hot and hits all the points and i can't wait to see more stories to come from you !! much love, ally

If I could give you a higher rating I would.... that was the most phenomenal story ever! A few grammatical errors, but nothing to detract from the story.

It was exactly as promised in your intro. In some places the narrative was a little awkward but worth every bit of 5*.

Yes, there were a few errors. He knew his sister, not he new his sister and similar. The main point? It is a good story told with amazing sensitivity and understanding. If you can write such stories consistently you deserve to be in the top ranking of Literotica authors. Very well done.

Ending? You left me hanging. It was too good and too emotional to just leave it hanging.

I think it would have been better if King would have fought for her, but the story isn't mine. Well done and thank you!

This one made me nervous because it actually involved other people finding out, but its really well written. I like to think that they become closer friends with the triplets after.

MORE!!!!!!!!

That was just brilliant. If there's a sequel, I'm all for it, but that was such a great ending, nothing else is needed.

Bravo, top story. Loved it. More please. I hope they can stay together and make babies.

Love it, please write more stories. You are an away writer.

Phenomenal!!! You had my emotions pulled through the wringer. I felt and breathed their every high and every low. I need you to write more stories… This was beautifully written

Good morning! We need a new chapter of this! I love this story! Are you going to write more? Please do!

Wonderful start to your writing endeavours! Please continue with more in this story or, better yet, with many other stories in this genre. Thank you