by Live2licku
This was one of you first stories published back in the day wasn't it? If so, I hope "Ch. 01.1" means a sequel is in the works or a lengthy expansion, it was beyond good, it was great, the first time I read it. A sequel involving more than just Wendy, Pam, and Angie, may their mother, cousins, or even a few classmates or neighbors.
This story made me throb so much because it reminded me so much how promiscuous my younger sister was and how in awe she was when she saw my big penis for the first time!
Very nice. It was a smooth read with nothing to jar the reader out of the experience.
I hope there are another dozen chapters to come, and hopefully you'll flesh out the characters a bit. Maybe give us some insight into what the women are feeling now that they've been exposed.
Loved it! I wonder how sexy Clark's mom is and if she might be his next conquest?
Looks like this uploaded with a small error, there should be a line break after the "You're my cock sucking slut sister, that's all I need from you" line. I'll have to re-upload and fix that.
Clancy31015 - Yes, this was the first story I ever wrote, a long time ago (2002!). Did you remember seeing it back in the day? It's been my favorite for a while, but the original version here had a few spelling and grammatical errors that always bugged me. I also wanted to enable commenting.
I might write some more chapters, it depends on how the response is. I have a lot of notes about the characters and what happens behind/between the scenes here in chapter 1.
I noticed a few more little mistakes (mostly in edit's I made). Working on fixing them.
I have really enjoyed the original upload of this for years. Please keep going, you're a good writer with good ideas. Don't let this be the only story you upload!
Awesome story. Can't wait for more. Would love to read Wendy getting pregnant.
A perfect sequel would be their mother catching them with Pam and Wendy or even a sleepover or the cheerleading squad finding out about his huge equipment before a competition and them walking funny to school or the competition.
It's funny, I got several messages with ideas of what to do next, many of them varying wildly from each other. Believe it or not, I have a lot of background written for these characters and I wouldn't want to do something that I don't think matches their personalities.
I'm working on the next chapter, though I'm not sure when it will be done. It's the same story as this one, except told mostly from Clark's perspective instead of Angela's. There's a lot omitted from this chapter that I wanted to include. I'll post the revision I mentioned to Chapter 1.1 once I've completed this next chapter.
I enjoyed your story and saw your recent comment. I am into the cuckold incest thing. Its definitively a category thats picking up but theres a certain kind of story that isnt touched upon much. A stud brother fucking his mom while his wimpy brother watches. Give a story like that a shot. Thanks.
@Clancy31015 I've got a few more chapters of this story in the pipeline, but I keep revising and rethinking them.
Made a few more small changes to this story - fixed more mistakes and rethought a few of the changes I made before. This comment will probably go up before the updates are approved, if someone is looking for an immediate difference. I've been working intermittently on several other chapters of this story, but I keep rethinking things and so it's going slow. If you like this story, feel free to comment or give feedback. I enjoy talking about story ideas with people, if anyone is curious about what I've been working on.
Goddamn dude. This story is awesome. Got such a fat trouser burster of a boner right now from this story. I hope you write more chapters!
WOW. Stayed aroused all through the story. Please write more chapters soon. DWH