All Comments on 'Her Bully'

An absolutely beautiful and loving story. I enjoyed how you built the challenges into friendship and ultimately into love. Just a wonderful morning read.

Thought “system development discussions” enhanced this love story — provided background that made the outcome feel real. Never distracting; could visualize workplace dynamic. As a near hopeless romantic, really enjoyed this piece as well as others you’ve crafted. Please continue to share your imagination.

A thoroughly enjoyable read. Well crafted with good characterization. Well done and five stars from me.

Aww. A little abrupt pacing, but overall a sweet story. Thanks!

What you said at the beginning about a slow build up not being to my liking, was wrong. I found it was paced just right it was a beautifully written story. I loved it immensely, you have my deepest gratitude and heartfelt wishes to continue on writing stories like this or any other stories that wander in that beautiful mind of yours!!!!!

What a lovely story, with a nice hot conclusion too.

Well written.

Can we get a part 2?

When reading I thought the first page and a half could have been a little shorter, but by time I finished I don't want you to change a thing. very good 5 star story.

Outstanding and so well done. Excellent and wonderful characters that made a great story. Top shelf entertainment 5 star. Cheers

The ending sort of dropped off a cliff but the entire story was otherwise very entertaining. Well done!

A 5-star-worthy story through the first three pages. But that ending was...ABRUPT...and perfunctory! Almost like you grew tired of it, or were running up against a self-imposed word count. There was a lot more potential here in these characters and this story as Mireille and Angela navigate their evolving relationship. You have talent. I hope you revisit this story at some point and expand upon it.