All Comments on 'Her Contract Enatails Ch. 04'

I was wondering if you would ever finish the story you started in '04. Her name was Sophie Higgins back then, and you left us hanging, waiting to see if she would ask Dr. Pickford for gills. This version is much more intriguing and has a bad guy, unlike the first one, had me on the edge of my seat all the way through. Keep up the good work, maybe revisit Carla and Jared for a peek at a mermaid tryst underwater? (or maybe Jared could visit Dr. Pickford...)

As always Nate, absolutely wonderful!

This series belongs in the Erotic Horror section. I can't imagine how it'd be to go through what Carla did, but this story is fantastic. You should write more stories like it :)

What about their children?

I was hoping that he would undergo the procedure too and the two of them would relocate as a family into the sea