All Comments on 'Her Daddy, Dom, and Neighbor in One'

Love the build up and character building. They feel like real people

And a very nice beginning, thank you.

Waiting for chapter 2

I really enjoyed how well you developed your characters with so few words. Very uncluttered. I'm hoping you will continue this story! Thanks! :)

MastersWench

If Lit holds true, Chapter 2 should appear tomorrow, and Chapter 3 shortly thereafter. For now, I only have three chapters written and in the hopper, but I left Chapter 3 open for future chapters.

This is the best story I have read in a long, long long time. 5 stars does not do it for this story. it should be 10 stars. Hurry up with the next part pleaseeeeeee?

This is honestly the best story I have read on here in years. It's so sexy and suspenseful. Great writing!

Very good. Of course I wouldn't expect anything less from you. Your writings are quite enjoyable. Great job. I can't wait to read more!

That was a great set up. You have chapters already done, but I so hope this stays sweet, caring and kinky Daddy and little. The recent rash of S/M, harsh, slavey DD/bg stories has been disheartening. He's spent years watching over her. That level of care can't be washed away instantly.

PS-She needs to order from a company that ships unmarked packaging. Nobody's business knowing what's in the box.

This is so rare to find someone on the internet that you already know and lives so close. I hope that these factors do not interfere with the dynamics of the relationship. He is right, he family can never know the nature of their relationship should it become more permanent. I believe you said you had three chapters, is that it or are you going to develop it further?

What an absolute great start to I'm hoping a wonderful series! 5*

What a superb 5* start to, what I hope will be, a story with many chapters.

Jules

Never was into daddy dom but this is hot. Can't wait for the next part

I love the gentler domination of a Daddy Dom. Although I am much too old to participate, if I had known about the lifestyle in my younger days I think I would have enjoyed being a baby girl. I am anxious to see how the story progresses. JudyLee

I love it... hope you continue!

Very good story wish there was more to read.

Hot! The presentation of the sub is beautifully done

Mmm, I loved that. I want more of this,,,

hey not sure if your still around, but there’s a story like this on wattpad word for word all the same, not sure if you care or not just thought i’d let you know!

Could you let me know the name of it and who posted it? I am shortly pulling down all of my stories on Literotica, but I would still like to know.