All Comments on 'Her Daddy's Dick'

I like it - please continue.

I think I can anticipate the end of this story. It’s how you will take us there that will count. A loving story between two people caring about each other. And a third who planned it all out in advance. Finish it or not, this one could stand on its own. If you self-edited you did well. If there are mistakes they were minor and didn’t cause a stumble. Thank you!

Unique. Erotic. Hot as hell. Well done!

What would happen if Denise became pregnant? The average age for menopause in the US is 51!

I was really creeped out with the guy having sex with his comatose (or at least unresponsive) wife. He might as well had sex with a corpse.

Yes, the author was very careful to state she gave her permission, but still creepy, yucky and whatever other words you care to use.

Frankly, I'm surprised it passed the moderators.

If there was massive brain damage but she could still be fed, chances are Denise feels pleasure and is fully aware of being fucked by her husband.

Brilliant! Maybe a tad uncomfortable, but the story justifies the two characters' motivations. They both want something they shouldn't have, but perhaps it's the only solution that will work, and there's a chance Denise somehow gave this her blessing. Please finish -- it's been months since the first installment.

hey I loved the whole decription thing you did of him imagining what his daughter must be doing. Overall its a great story 5 stars

An absolutely wonderful story. Your ability to carry your story to your audience and elicit their attention through to completion is only slightly short of phenomenal.

Good lord that was a masterpiece. You really know how to bring climactic buildup and your ability to paint a picture is excellent. I aspire to be as descriptive as you are.