You have made a nice start to your story. My only comment would be to have more content in each chapter or your story will be hundreds of chapters long, and I hope it will be long and as interesting as it has started out to be.
Hello my name is Aurbianna Jaide... Welcome to my playground! Come inside the sultry and seductive imagination of an everyday woman whose need for self-expression lead to the building of this decadent website. Journey with me through the characters, stories, and adventures...