All Comments on 'Her Eyes Did The Talking'

Great build, great story.

I cannot put into words my thoughts on this story. all I can say is that this is the best romantic sex filled story I have ever read..

This story is out of the usual stereotypes, usual topics and is inclusive. I love it!!! Very well written and funny as hell. Congrats!!

A thoroughly enjoyable read. There is probably a really excellent part 2 around these three characters. Thank you for this story.

Sexy and different type of story line incorporating a hearing impaired hottie... liked the way you roped us in with her introduction while masking her impairment.

Loved all the Tahoe stuff as I lived there for over 8 years. Was hoping when they were heading down the lake to dinner the destination would be the old West Shore Cafe in Homewood, spent many nights there boat dining/cocktails and passing time with the fun people on the lake. Thanks for the nostalgia.

Don't think black belts actually go looking to initiate harm no matter what someone is spouting.

Thanks for sharing your stories here.

I echo other’s sentiments about this story. It’s witty, sexy, and very inclusive. Loved it, and I would love to see more of these characters!!

That was magnificent! Beautifully written. Wonderful characters and story. Your portrayal of Kaitlyn, the way she communicates so effectively with expression, her directness and purity of emotion ring so true for someone with her “condition”. And thank you for not obsessing about cup sizes and body measurements. That always takes me out of a story.

I think I have to go back right now and read it again.

You’re a good writer. Engaging story line. I love how you set up the initial attraction and sexual encounter without giving away that Kaitlyn is deaf. The characters are well done and believable. Please do add a sequel. I’d like to know what else they get up to as a trio.

I have several deaf friends and you did a great job capturing some of the "deaf bluntness ". I'm always amazed at the deaf communities sexual and verbal (sign) openness. It has really stretched me in ways that are hard to explain. Great job.

I do not think I have ever spent so much time reading any short story before, erotic or not. The pacing and timing were incredible. It is rare that an author can actually vary my reading speed to the speed of the story. I tend to devour things. I actually felt languid at times and also incredibly ravenous at other times.

That being said, the beginning is a bit clunky. The first few paragraphs about Dan could have been shorter and some of those details worked into the rest of the story to give a better flow to the beginning. The rest of the story was so smooth and practically perfect.

Honey, here's my sexy naked girlfriend and I want you to fuck her senseless.

OK, sweetie, but let's just cuddle for tonight...

Honey, I've got a great idea! I know you woke up with a stiffie and all, and my hot and sexy girlfriend is right there under your hands and ready to go, but lets go water skiing instead? We can put off the fucking until tonight, can't we?

Yep, sure.

The whole story again and again has a "nice fantasy, but yeah - right" feel to it.

Unbelievable.

Very descriptive, good length, great story.

Did anyone else have trouble with every single sentence seemingly compromising a paragraph? Usually we see paragraphs running on and on, but here they seemed too short and it chopped up the flow. Consider a review of paragraph construction in your favorite style manual or online.

Please continue this story. So complicated, but so simple. Who will or will not agree with the situation? Or will it just be the 3 of them?

P-R-E-C-I-O-U-S...!

One of my Top Two, All Time!

(The other is "Nature Is For The Birds" by Kethandra.)

The quality of writing here is a level I aspire to...in my song and play writing forms.

A very few "fixies"?

In the cavern scene, you have an S at the end of Toward.

When the Amber and Dan (without Kaitlyn) sex arrives, it becomes

less unique, more like all others here?

I think it's the last page, a By which looks like it wants to be My?

And following Amber's WOW moment, it needs more clarity that signing

is occurring. Not before then, but we readerfolks have gone along with

fewer uses...Although longer sentences lose some credibility, generally.

As a fourth generation Northern Californian, with time in Novato and Lake Tahoe,

it was BLISS.

P.S. If Amber and/or Kaitlyn visit Nashville, I will be pleased to share with them!

As the title says, this is a wonderful story. You have a great writing and storytelling technique.

To answer the question on paragraph style, much of the story involves conversation or private thoughts (not just of the narrator). It is normal to change paragraphs when the owner of the thought or conversation changes. This helps the reader keep up with who is talking.

Great, a bit wordy in places and somewhat over detailed but so full of great sex well described and a good plot with great characters.

Most enjoyable reading; well done. Looking forward to more from Kaitlyn, Amber & Dan.

Exceptional.

See a beautiful Triad in their future...they LOVE each other too much to not eventually get there

How could Kaitlyn be swaying to the musi, when Dan initially saw her, and then dance with him to varying tempos of music,

if she were deaf?

Maybe it's possible -- if so, then we readers should have been informed as to how.

Paul in Oklahoma

Sensational Story. Enjoyed the most. Very well written. More to come I hope from this author.

The suspense, sexual pleasures, and carnal desires have been listed to the most minute details.

You make the story come alive. Thank you!

FIRST class what a lucky guy 🎆🎆🎆

So nice that your characters are "differently able" - you have a lovely way of addressing and celebrating challenges like deafness here and ED in another story

You take your time to show respect to each character and develop their body attributes fully. I can almost smell their individual carnal aromas.

Extremely well written story!! Totally believable with a tenderness to the growing love and sexual relationships rarely seen in this genre.

What a fun story to read. Very romantic and erotic. :-p” Thanks for your great contribution to Lit.

Even on multiple reads, it still needs chapter 2. 3, 4, etc.

I recently discovered GoneGray and am slowly going through all of his stories. I love his characters, the dialogue, the foreplay in his sex scenes, as well as the sex itself.

I’ve already used a few of his ideas to pleasure my wife. If she were here, I’m sure she’d offer her thanks.

Stopped reading the moment Dan and his huge dick penetrated her cervix... Not the first story with this particular and impossible feat. Too bad because otherwise the story was very interesting.

Reply to KinkyBear: Maybe I did not write this clearly enough, but I meant to write that her cervix was retracting to let his penis past it. I never said he penetrated or entered her cervix.