by Radar45
At what point did your brain fry and you couldnt recognize how bad this truly was?
I guess when this incident happened,i was not even born!!
So many years later,the same thing is gonna happen again๐.
The only difference being, instead of his wife,it's me going to be in her place!!!๐๐Excited!!!!๐๐๐
It was a bunch of two sentance paragraphs. Wait, can two sentences actually be called a paragraph? Can i get a ruling here?
Sounds like both men were RABITS.Too fast for a woman to enjoy.
Was not short enough ZZZZZzzzzzzz. Damn waste of my time. Maybe next time You'll have something to write.
It actually is a good story in my opinion, only bit to straight forward, should have been written out a bit more, but I love the idea behind it. Try to write the next chapter a bit more elaborate.
This was short enough to have been written for premature ejaculators.
Suggestion...either take two more sentences to describe Panda, or change her name to Rose or Patsy or Maria or Tanya! I will employ my seldom-used PC sensitivity and NOT convey the mental image I have for a woman named Panda!
Why do so many American women move to the UK for a decent shag?
What is with the Brits & this Aussie? Are they all fags & wimps?
Typical fuckin Queenslander! My God, you call yourself an Aussie? Fuck me! this was absolute rubbish!