All Comments on 'Her Friend's Brother'

by RomaLeeves

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Fun, quick, sexy read.

Great details and characterization, plus a playful story with just the right amount of slow burn.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Consider changing title

This story is lite but good enough to think about how to make the best impact. Let us learn who hooks up with whom in the story instead of the title.

RomaLeevesRomaLeevesover 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback

Thanks for taking the time to comment. You're absolutely right-- I just left my working title on it, and it's pretty terrible.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please for the love of god continue the story/relationship between Grace and Duke

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