by R410a
What a beautiful, sweet and erotic story. I felt it. Thank you for a job well done
Another 5-star story - well done, sir! I always know, when I see a new story from you, that I'm going to enjoy the story, the characters, and the plot. Thank-you for this latest great read! :)
Smoothly written throughout. Just enough of the small things to match the larger more inspiring items and nice wrap up. Very close to realistic or not so.
BRAVO!!
OK, I admit it; I am a sucker for a happy ending. There were several in this story !
Thank you for sharing it with us
Ed
Tender-hearted loving intercourse ,with mutual respect & trust
Well done. Sweet, tender, and still sexy! This could just as easily have gone in Romance as Mature.
Thank you!
I love damsel in distress stories, and this one was excellent. Five stars! But I found his kids missing throughout the story being a negative. They needed to be part of the story.
I think you are a first class author. I loved the tenderness of the story and will be going back to read others from you.
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Thanks again and this is a full Five Star Story.
Writen from the heart with really good descriptive narrative and an economy of words that works really well. I felt that not only did I know these people but understood their motivation and feelings. Thank you 5☆
Every time my heart would start to break, you put it right back together. I won’t even lie. I straight up cried reading this, but I adored it!
I like your way of writing. Was easy to get into the characters heads. Keep it up.
It kept me going to the end. And the end was better than expected.
PS Love the author's non de plume. Refrigerant gas indeed!
A complete story had almost everything in it. Thanks for sharing.
Difficult situations handled smoothly from beginning to end. What she said at the wedding dinner might have gotten her trouble with some of his family but it was from the heart.
Great story! I'm glad I took the chance and read it. Wish the world was like this, but sadly it is not. Thanks for your time and imagination.
for a great romance. Loved the story, and the characters came to life instantly. Thanks for sharing!
Is sad when age differce will seperate a good couple.broke my heart when she left him. Great story.5
This was a very good story, but sad that they couldn’t stay together. Maybe a part two where Greg can’t get her pregnant and Greg requests the Knight’s return, at least for three to four kids worth. :)
I just read this again...ever better the second time around!!!
I Believe that doing the right thing,Because you can is more than enough to make some of the bad things that go on in our world, Easier to get through,Even though I don't always know just what to do, some times Its just a kind word that is what makes the difference in another life,It's so easy to just turn your back on what needs to be done, saying I don't want to get involved. But the bottom line is, to really be a man you have to stand up, For the innocent, and the week, Those who can't defend them selves. As for him having sex with her, It's not my place to judge them. yes I know it's a story, often times, and life, Mimic each other.I find my self, being honest. I two would have loved fucking, her as much as he did, That does not mean,it would have been the right thing to do. I like think that I lead by example, and yet trying to explain that to a young woman, would have been very hard, knowing now all that she had gone through. thanks good story
Dear Author, a beautiful, bitter sweet tale of love between the generations. Thank you and much enjoyed. 5^ as usual. jntiques/john
Thanks for the story. I'm going to read all of your stories.
yep... yay my new favourite Author — and a ton of stories to read!
Wonderful story. Did Tina end up with children? She has Ted & Alice for grandparents. As written, Ted helped Tina, not took from her, when she needed it most. Wonderful writing!
If only more people would act like Ted and Tina in the real world, it would be a much better place.
Great story, 5 ⭐️
Super story. Heart touching emotions invoking. Characters had good depth and seemed real. The age difference was pretty wide, but her desire was clearly shown in the development of her character. Might not be the best situation but it is still a wonderful story. Man does the right thing and finds an unexpected reward. That he told her upfront she would need to find someone her age is a plus. The flow from father figure to lover back to father figure is well done. His new love interest sounds intriguing. Would love more of this tale if you ever decide to pick it up again.
Beautiful well written story Thanks for sharing your creativity. John
Like all of your stories this one was great. The difference was that it had warmth and care throughout the story, only into the meat of the story did sex enter. I'd give you a 10-rating if I could.
Good story, it veered a bit too close to too weird for comfort in a couple of places, but overall I really liked it!
I really enjoyed this story. It flowed well and there was a sweetness about the story that I can’t put into words. Ty n great job🌹
Well done. 5* you write they way life goes. I'm still working through your vast library and have yet to hit a klinker! Well done...