All Comments on 'Her New Life'

by spbgirl

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Has possibilities

The first page is WAAAAY too confusing, and it takes years(?) for the hookup.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Ignore the comment below this

I didn't find the story confusing at all, and the timing of the hookup was fine. I enjoyed the story and encourage you to write more!

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