All Comments on 'Her New Neighbor Ch. 12'

by ThaDee

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MrWilburMrWilburalmost 3 years ago

Thank you for a most enjoyable yarn. I truly appreciate all the effort that it takes to produce such a character and plot filled novel. Kudos! I look forward to your next story

ThaDeeThaDeealmost 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you to everyone who read and enjoyed it. I’ve been ready to move on from this story for a while and I’m glad it’s done. I still like these characters a lot, so as you might’ve guessed, I’m possibly thinking of a spin off with the Sheri and Allen pairing. I don’t know, you guys give me your feedback on that, or if I should go another route.

Thanks again, hope you enjoyed my work. This is all fun to me and it something I take seriously; it’s just a way to play with my kinks/fetishes. Have a good day y’all.

ThaDeeThaDeealmost 3 years agoAuthor

Meant to say it’s ‘something I don’t take seriously’ in that original comment I posted lol This is all just about having fun.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Loved the story!! good ending and I'm glad you are gonna use some of the characters for another tale. loved Sheri and allen and would luv to see them again. Great story and happy u finished it

8796Porno8796Pornoalmost 3 years ago

Thank yout for this almost always positive story. I would be glad for a real continuation, not a spin off - some kind of epilogue with all persons Ray included ...

ThrillherbrysonThrillherbrysonalmost 3 years ago
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Looking forward to your future projects. Thank you for closing this series out for those who enjoyed it. Thank you for not quitting writing. If you're finished writing the side story hopefully you could give that an ending as well, if not soon then at some point? I was enjoying that one. I know whatever you have planned for us will be great. Good luck and I wish you a fun time in writing it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Thanks for finishing this one for us Dee! It was a nice conclusion. Look forward to your future work 👍👌

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

You are a good writer, as a story, the writing was good, but I have to it was cliche, this stories always painting white as poor and bad lovers, or weaklings, is not always necessary, there was no need for Ryan to get harassed, no need for her lover to follow her back, he should have simply divorced her with his head held high, it’s not going to take a week to forgive for Julie to forgive her cheating mother, let’s not forget she got pregnant, she should have worked harder at getting her daughter forgiveness, you followed a direct part, no twist and turns to make it more unpredictable,though you provided good suspense, all in all a good story, even though it fictional, painting white as weakling and poor lovers the is just boring,

NoWay50NoWay50over 1 year ago

Excellent and fun stories and world you've created.

One thing that is interesting about most Literotica stories, and that your stories follow, is how most pregnancies end up with kids... And, if given time, there direction of life ahead, with kids, moms and dads into responsibly happy lives generally follows. If other choices were made, the stories would be boring...

Keep up the good work and the examples of the good interesting story lives that you provide, even if a few mistakes and/or side shows have been made.

rhoonie9rhoonie9over 1 year ago

started as an attractive erotic story but ended as an average romantic one.

TestUser0815TestUser0815over 1 year ago

Awesome story, but it is disappointing that after all that Shannon did not swallow 1 single bbc load

MarsPatrolMarsPatrol9 months ago

Loved all of it.

cub06cub064 months ago

I enjoyed the story. I would have liked more about Shannon's and Ryan's break-up and more with Shannon talking with Julie about what happened. Just another thought...it would have added some eroticism if Lennox had Shannon get a Q of Spades tattoo and add some jewelry to her nipples, clit, and labia.

acmalk02acmalk02about 1 month ago

Nice story, do you plan to write another part of it?

Would like to see how things turned out for Shannon

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