All Comments on 'Her New Stepbrother'

Short, but nicely done.

Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté

Wonderful beginning to a love story...

Very nice.

Can we expect more?

Hot sexy story, I hope you keep going with these two sexy people.

people unrelated by blood can and do get married all over the world legally.

You have a talent for writing. Very rarely does a story this short engross me like this.

Wonderful story! Hopefully there is more. 5 stars

Wow! Great shortie.

*****That's some good storytelling very unique storyline very hot and sexy. Thanks for sharing.

Please tell me you are writing another chapter!? That was a great story. You write really good. Sucked me in right at the start and your descriptions incredible!

A well written and imaginative story!

It is a good start to a great story but why stop when it just gets going. Needs more to make a complete story. Gets a three from me but would be a 5 if continued. 3/5

Absolutely loved this short story. Your writing skills are fantastic 😊. Keep going .

Xoxo-Mistress M