All Comments on 'Her Secret'

by countrygirl14

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
good start

This seems ot will be a goid story. More please.

trigudistrigudisalmost 8 years ago
Needs A Follow-up

Your ending suggests a conflict of emotions/interests. Julie calls it a one-night stand, whereas Kevin seems to want something more. Perhaps you can explore that theme in a subsequent chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
user

the user gets used, most of the time its the male that goes for a one night stand.

In this tale she gave him a one night stand . pretty boy got his ego busted.

rbloch66rbloch66over 1 year ago

This should be in Erotic Couplings. As a romance story, this sucked.

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