by princessjennie
Very good... a complete story that leaves things open for more adventures...
Part 1 was one of the hottest stories I ever read, I am sooo happy you wrote a part 2-equally hot & sexy but too short, pout! Although, you made up for it by making it obvious a part 3 was in the works...and maybe more (hint, hint!) I loved the beginning, the way she wasn't falling all over herself chasing after them, and the end was absolutely hilarious. Please, please, please write more SOON!
Thank you for the throbbing hard-on!!!
I thought this story read more fluidly than Ch. 1 (which I also liked). I still felt somewhat confused after Drew enters her ass, because there was a time or two that I was convinced you misused Adam's name.
Having said that, I must add that the addition of the little elements like her school uniform and pink bra and panties were excellent garnishes to this erotic little tale.
Very nice, I look forward to reading future installments!!
Happy
God, wanna tell me where i can get a set of em fer meself??!! now i know why i'm an only child!! can't wait for the next instalment!
You absolutely HAVE to continue this story. This is one of the sexiest stories that I have ever read on this site. I am eagerly waiting for the next part.
This is absolutely one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. I bookmarked your member page so that I can check for updates. Please, please continue this story!
I loved this story! I have it bookmarked on my computer. Please write more for this story I'm dying to know what happens next. I really love how they both seemed possessive of her. It's soo sexy! Please write more soon! I'll be watching!
Waiting to read the next one. I have bookmarked you so I can see when the new one comes out.. Loved it
You mixed up Adam and Drew a few moments in this chapter. I dislike pointing that out but it's either that or I just read it wrong and got confused. Good job, otherwise.
I see in the comments that people have been loving this story for 10 years! Incredible! I liked that this chapter was more believable than ch 1... will read the rest soon!
Hahaha! That was absolutely fucking awesome ;). Love all the characters so far, loved that the anal scene was realistic, using real lube and fingers first, not dry or with some spit or a bit of pussy juice and shoving it in like in so many stories:/. ...I'd like to try a variation of that scene again with my wife; a flexible rubber dildo in her ass first, then me trying to get in her tight pussy. Didnt go so well the first time around... No problem with the dildo anally, but she was inpossibly tight up front. (...well I could have gotten in, hehe;) I mean TighT. Daaamn! Either she couldn't relax enough or we might have to do anal after Im in her tight pussy first! Gawd, my mouth is watering just thinking about it! Hehehe.
Anyway, love love loved this chapter! My only complaint, and its kind of important, is the guys names got mixed up several times at important places in the story!! That could use an edit fix and repost!
Thanks for writing for us!!
I got confused at points because you switched between the two names when you didn't mean to at times. It messed with the flow of the story whilst I figured that out. Otherwise it was really good.