All Comments on 'Her Secret Crush Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
At Last .....

So glad you decided to start on this story again, can't wait until the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Finally....

I'm glad you decided to continue this story. Excellent!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
???Crush

Good Story, I just want to get more of it. But who has the crush Drew Adam or Katie ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Please More

Great Story!!!!!!! I wish for a Drew.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Excellent offering!

I'm so glad your continued this series. Looking forward to the next chapter.

HotSprings22HotSprings22over 17 years ago
love it

great story, although the characters keep switching names, it was a really hot read. now im thinking of doing something like it myself ;D

Mr Wild willyMr Wild willyover 17 years ago
MORE!!!

Wonderful story line. Need to get them more romantically involved now. Have her move in with him for College maybe? Great series so far, but PLEASE don't make us wait another year!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
great

these are great stories but you have to get the names straight! maybe but more physical diffrence between adam and drew too so the even when you mix the names we know who you are talking about

AemlynAemlynover 17 years ago
Goddamn.

This is the hottest story I've read. I can get off to most sex scenes in stories, but the teasing, the gentleness, the roughness of these stories make me go INSANE without even touching myself. It feels like a flood of pleasure. It's incredible. I personally would like to see more actual storyline between them, like the beginning. You got to know how these people thought and acted. Give them more personality and it will be even hotter, if possible.

<3Aly

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
HOT

That was great please make more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
whoa

your stories are hot. they are some of the best on the site. I'm glad you got the names straightened out, too. :) more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
God! So HOT!

God, this was just too hot! I was very disappointed when I saw there wasn't any more to it. I wanted it never to end! You really need to get things straight though. You keep changing it from Drew being her real brother to being her step brother. Confusing. Nevertheless, you need to right more, and soon! I would love to see something romantic between Drew and Katie, and maybe him telling her that he likes her for more than sex. But, that's my opinion. =D Loooved it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Loved it!

I loved it! The confusion mixed with the pleasure she feels just gets me so turned on! I have no idea where you are going to go next! Dont make us wait too long, maybe next it could be about Drew, and get her more confused, before she is delt an ultimatum! Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
WOW

it wonderful but there needs to be more!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Keep going

I like the story, but you haven't updated in a while. Don't stop now.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
gimme gimme !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

love it like air like breath ...

cant explain !!

i kept checkin constantly for updates or d next one !!

pls pls ls continue ...

i need it !!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Great

Would love to see how this story ends and see who she ends up with. Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
I'm dying here!!!!!!!!!

LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! But when are you going to finish it....Please, Pretty Please, Pretty Please with anything on top... We need to know what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Need to get the boys names right!

Story is hot.. but you need to get the names straight!

Edit the third part of this story! THEN it will be awesome!

Jena121Jena121over 16 years ago
More.............................

more more more please please please

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
keep writing please

hey princess jennie! i am really enjoying this story! its really hot! may you please continue it? thatd be totally awesome! thanks!

naughtybitch18naughtybitch18almost 16 years ago
more?

this story is freaking awesome! please continue it!!!

oreofanoreofanover 10 years ago
amazing!

we love this series! thank you so very much! heheh

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