All Comments on 'Her Stormy First Time'

I definitely enjoyed reading this!

Flopping between tenses, leaving out words, can't distinguish between "your" and "you're" -- lousy writing.

I posted this story in honor of a friend who wrote this as a gift to me. No these events never happened. It is just a fantasy. I kept the names from the story and I did not edit the story. I wanted to keep in its original format since my friend wrote this to me. The main character is him talking to me telling me the story. There was suppose to be a note posted in the beginning of the story for readers.

i love your story....

it feels like i am really in your story.

it feels so close for me, because i am paralyzed and need to use a wheelchair....

its a great story!

thank you very much for sharing!

Lisa

Loved your story, so deeply feeling.

Especially loved the way you spoke with a wonderful voice.