by HeyAll
As always, I hope you've enjoyed this, and I hope you're doing well in life. Please take care.
heyall
Nice (and hopefully start of a series - would enjoy following more of Ms. Cortez and Agent Smith).
you have a fantastic story... time to think about additional chapters or series... this one is prime for success
Great story. Both loving interesting, with a bit of kink in the end. Keep up the good work. And, possibly a sequel?
Hell yeah!. I'm not into lesbos but this is Hot. Another chapter or two would be nice!
Interesting story. I know series isn't your thing but this would certainly make the start of an interesting one. Give it a shot. What the hey!
Cheers
SAGE
Really enjoyed the premise of this story. Well written and very sexy, and I liked the introduction of the watersports at the end. I agree with others that it would make an interesting series.