All Comments on 'Herded'

stupid just what is this about not worth reading

convoluted, no beginning, middle or end

I really tried but alas very bad

I … read … A LOT of porn. most written incest porn is the same basic scenarios, but every once in a while I stubble upon something with something surprisingly different. This is one of them. I for one really like it...and cows aren't even my thing... but I do know someone who would LOVE this story it is right up her ally and I will definitely be sharing it with her.

As a side notefrom a writing standpoint... You did a spectacular job. I like how you let the writing show the transition from person to cow.

Ok so it a little Rocky at first but I absolutely love love loved the transition! It's almost like a scary story!

The transition from human to animal is flawless...

Holy shit that was amazing. The way you write the descent into them becoming livestock is very well done. It’s so fluid and gradual that by the time you realize it they’re fully transformed. Even though I’m not a big fan of time jumps, I think you did it well because, while the change is gradual the sudden flash backs to them being “normal” really enunciate how far they’ve fallen. 10/10 story hit all my fetishes too <3