All Comments on 'Here Comes The Night'

Short and sweet.....and the words used really makes one connected to the story !!! A very good one for a first attempt and I love the hint of mystery :)

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A smooth first story, boding well for future efforts.

Great buildup, the tension was awesome. And love your prose style as well. Keep writing please!

I enjoyed your story, well written ,nice innocent ....well done do write more.

Hi AndSo! Everyones right! This is an excellent first story, and I'm sure each one will get better. Good job!

Woman

What a beautiful story! Wonderfully written, gorgeous imagary and descriptions, and deeply erotic too. Fantastic, and soski!

A great effort, and so...... you have a real sense of the erotic

Excellent effort... i very much enjoyed it

Well written and thought out pice. Great use of language and although only short, intriging, intensifying and intelligent. Cant wait for more!!

I really do love this story. It is eerily like a fantasy come to life. Every movement, action, reaction, the way it progresses, how it unfolds, it is achingly like something I want myself. I love the desire you show here and the unashamed way you write. It's dirty, it's filthy, and it's beautiful. There you go ;]