All Comments on 'Here to Stay Ch. 04'

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WatercrazyWatercrazyover 15 years ago
Beautiful

again. Thank you for another great chapter. I hope you keep writing and posting a long time from now on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Normally not into romance

I usually like hot sex pure and simple,being a married Bi.

However, this one has me interested.

Ex0ticPrincessEx0ticPrincessalmost 13 years ago

Splendid!

I wonder when they actually make love, its gonna be amazing I bet :)

Ex0ticPrincessEx0ticPrincessalmost 13 years ago

Splendid!

I wonder when they actually make love, its gonna be amazing I bet :)

ikhneumonikhneumonover 12 years ago
That's one long concert!

Three symphonies AND a concerto? Man, those musicians must be racking up the overtime!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

". . . he cried more than a pre-menopausal woman." Edit that to "premenstrual woman" - a premenstrual woman may be a little weepy because of hormone levels going up and down, but there's no reason I can think of for a pre-menopausal woman to be crying.

Good story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Glad you mentioned Gavins crying

thought that too. however I am liking the sweetness and tenderness between the two

kmillerk1kmillerk1almost 9 years ago
Ahhhhhh

What a wonderful story and building up to be a great relationship, :)

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