All Comments on 'Herman Ch. 02'

No. He's done too many other fantastic stories . But this is in the top 5% for sure. This brings back memories, although I've never been a porn star or juggled multiple women on any sustained basis. Ahhh those were the daze ! !

Herman is at that age where any desirable, willing woman can be serviced regardless of whether he had a good night's sleep or a nutritionally balanced meal ideally a hour and a half before bedroom gymnastics. If you combine that with his knowledge garnered as 18 year old gigolo . Why the world don't know what he might do.

Tragically, Just Plain Bob may have missed his calling. The porno sounds like a hoot - I only wish the old porn stars of yore like Tracey Adams as Linda, Ginger Lynn as Sam and Jerry Butler could be put in a time machine to make it now.

There is always a flaw to round in any story. Although Herman is making all his classes despite servicing 4-5 women, serial acting gig and cafeteria job .There has been no mention of quiet time for study & he just might not make the Dean's List.

Please put in grind time with books,in tandem with hipbones and current gold standard quality, or I will still award the five stars as I do now but I'll hesitate for one tenth of a second before I thank JPB for the next story as I do right now for this one .

This chapter is good again, but in the next chapters JPB will change the story direction or not?????

JPB you continually amaze me with your stories! Looking forward to next chapter!

I loved the play within a play... It permitted JPB to describe a whole set of cuckold scenes without anyone ranting and raving. I wonder if anyone can come out of being a porn star and then live a normal life? Of course, neither of them can complain about the other's past! Basically this protagonist was living a male fantasy and will now take the next step.

he's firing on all cylinders.

Amazingly well done. I am looking forward to the next chapter!!!

is Santa Claus fucking the tooth fairy while the Easter Bunny brings himself off over a Yeti to give it more realism than there's been up until now.

Is 3 done yet ? Having withdraws already . Thanks

This is a marvelous read. I believe the next chapter will involve the characters YBadger commented on, but it will be in Non-Human or Celebrities, and I will miss it!

5*

and now check the bed posts for gum and notes, TK U MLJ LV NV

Editor where art thou? The very first line is repeated on line two. Huh?

Good and entertaining as usual. It was too long between instalment. Can't wait.

C'mon Literotica, post the finale!

Well done !

A very enjoyable story that has drawn in this reader to have compation for a lot of the characters, especially for Herm, Sam and Linda.

I haven't any idea where the story is headed, but I am very interested in reading the rest of the story.

Thanks for the read.

Poor boy has a Lover and does'nt realise it.

Seems to be a pretty original story idea. Writing pretty good but better editing would strengthen it even more. I chuckled over the phrase, ""You are the first guy I have ever been with that I've had thoughts about making the long hall with." While some concert "halls" are long in design, we know the author meant "long haul," as in "hauling" a heavy suitcase for a long distance at the airport. Will keep reading as it is very entertaining. Thanks for a good one so far JPB!

But,in my humble opinion, this series is the very best by Bob. It also is a radical departure from some of his stories, which were obviously written for the masses of Lit readers. This effort is on the level of two best writers on Lit. I am impressed. Thanks Bob.

We should all use a different term. This term goes back to the days when all porters were black. How about SkyCap, baggage handler, etc.?

Another solid 5. Looks like this is headed toward being my favorite JPB story. I did not see Sam as his graduation present/reward. I assumed it would be one of the fluffers. But why rush? He's got a good thing going with Linda. Will Sam have her PhD when Herm graduates. Maybe they can all wind up in Chicago. What is Sam's "field of study?"

Why if Mr Burns was his mother's executor did he not tell him about the safety deposit box?.Also how come he didn't have a phone until Linda gave him the money for one,what did he do with his porn money.?

When Herm marries the fucked out whore Samantha

Very nice story and better personages

Very good, but: total separation of love and sex. Doesn’t augur well for long term relationships that seem on horizon.

Why didn't he buy the phone with the money he got from Sam.Also this story is heading into fantasy land.