All Comments on 'Hers'

Really enjoyed your story and enjoyed how well written it was as well. Keep up the fantastic work!!!

I love them and i love you're writing. Ty

I think this story is good, to a point. A good editor might have corrected some of the mistakes. Brooke became Brook. To instead of too. The were others but the white hot sex between Brooke and Suki made me forget them. Could have done without Ann altogether!

A really good story, well told, and fun to read.

Except that you need to run a good Spell-Check, like Grammarly, before you publish.

Owlswing!

This story was exciting, erotic and a lesbian sexual smorgasbord! I really enjoyed the ending, since I am partial to "Love Stories" and immediately felt that Suki was the love Brooke was searching for. The Story's other quite charming character was Allie the Hers's Bartender, who was always very sweet to Brooke on each visit to the club.

Definitely 5*-Stars & Please Write More Similar Type Lesbian Love Stories!!!!!

Thank you for sharing it with us!

Well written. Very erotic. Descriptive and the plot moved well.

Excellent story and very well written.

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Hallo Bree!

WOW It's Brilliant!... "Hers" is hot and sexy!... And Love, take it from your two kinky dyke friends, Chocolate and Vanilla... you have a winner here 💯💥,,, yes!

Another 5-Stars and 10-Yummy Orgasms!... And thank-you for sharing!

Your kinky dyke friends,

Queen Jackie, and Gay Kat..

Brook found her rock,,, Wonderful story.

If suki becomes the soulmate then the deed is done ...... Didn't all searching for this outcome ..... Love is the best for a stories ending ....... Lovely

Will Brooke find long term happiness? Will Suki be able to return Brookes’ love? Stay tuned to our next thrilling episode… what? This is finished! Oh Poo! So it is all well that ends well?

All kidding aside, this was a wonderful story. I was afraid Brooke wasn’t going to find her mate, but she showed up and saved the day. I am glad Suki found her ‘Ms Right’. 5 Stars

This story was sexy and sweet. I loved it!

Nicely written - lovely ending. X