All Comments on 'He's So Gay'

The basic storyline was very good, erotic and sexy BUT it could have done with a good edit and some work on the grammar. There were too many typos and tense changes for my liking and that's a pity because it had the potential to be a great story. Sorry but no 5 vote on this one.

This story is a bit gay!

Loved the story! The thief guy has got to come out of the closest though. He's gay! This one really got me going. It's great that the video guy helped him out and had his own fun too;-)

Very nice. True, you could improve with some editing and spell-checking, but it was not unreadable.

I loved it! Keep it up.

Not too bad. Very gay. Pretty hot. Nice story.

I thought that was a pretty good story. It was detailed, and was well written. I give u a 5.

You're my favorite author on literotica. I love all of your stories. Please continue to write.

of raw twenty-three year old sex and sincere tenderness. A lot of great moments but it was over too fast!

I liked this story. While I don't condone handcuffs and rope and spanking, I think it worked in Gavin's case since he came out of his closet. Whether he will stay out is another story. The sex was hot.

Delightful little fantasy.

great story, we all are who we are, society puts enough labels on us, we shouldnt do it to ourselves as well.

Thank you for sharing :)

It had a awesome story line and it really tells you about how we shouldn't deny ourselves! Its better to admit to your love and be honest than to lie to someone else and them think they are truly loved. So awesome!

Totally well deserved E. You are brilliant. There's no question you can write brilliantly and you can in fact also spell and do grammar - I got the feeling that sometimes you just forget these things while you're writing because you got yourself a bit horny and lost concentration! I love the humour throughout, so down to earth and the realism of the humour makes it all the more sexy because you feel like you're there. Don't sell yourself short by failing to edit. For some writers a final check ain't ever going to help much, but your writing deserves it.

This story is hot, horny and got me to go the video store just to see if this could happen to me. To bad it did not try again,

Just where is this store? I want to go there. I'd even shoplift if I have to.

This demands a sequel, and more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is a winner; SO hot! It almost makes me want to try to steal a gay porn video to get that treatment!

Very nice build up and ... nothing :(

Unfortunately, your ending was as anticlimactic as it gets. Switch right in the middle of a scene? Really? The guy comes up with "Master" all on his own and what he gets in return? He is asked to top. Why?? Why did you have to kill a perfect initialization??

There is nothing wrong with switching, but not like this.

Alex

I LOVEEEEE your stories!! But just wondering if u would make hunter and him end up together permanently and officially?... Pleaseeeeeeeeee?

Hot and engaging, even if the particular thing of tying up isn't my favourite

Sorry no consent was gotten, sex under threat of calling the police? Thats coersion. Also no safe word? Especially for the spanking? Also bisexuality is a thing, the statement you are one thing or the other isnt true. Some people need time to come out to themselves, the store. The clerk just basically raped the dude. He could be very traumatized. Dont pretend he did him a favor.

i enjoyed reading that book ,however reading books on a bus with a massive hard on in my pants attracts attention from a hot young guy who followed me off the bus ,he came to my house got on his knees and sucked my off ,swollowed my cum then showed my his tight hairy ass,so i barebacked him ,then fucked me ,then left ,two days later i went to see a co worker ,to drop files off, and he was there ,my pal from work asked uf i could drop him in town on the way home ,he spent the day taking my cock eating my cum .abd am still fucking him years later