by NedStarkers
VERY HOT!
Welcome to Literotica NedStarkers. Looking forward to more from your fertile imagination.
I must applaud your writing, very well done.
Some of the rehash at the start of 2 and 3 are not needed, just tell folks to start with Ch 1.
Other than that, Just WOW, very good.
Ramjet
As a redhead, I was imagining myself as Marianne the whole time and... oh my....
This is the first time I've ever commented on a Lit story but your series is so fucking sexy. The love between Rick and Moira is palpable and the inclusion of an honoured third party just makes it even better.
I do believe that Jared will have a lot of spank-bank material for quite a time to come.
Voted a full 5 for each of your 3 parts. Only because that's the highest that Lit will allow.