All Comments on 'Hi! I'm the Girl Next Door.'

Oh, I hope you run this story out for several chapters. I certainly got hot and hard.

I would like a bunny like her living next door.

my neighbors daughter. she started flirting with me and I fucked her in garage bent over the hood of her parents car

We need to hear more about how Dove gets the hard fucking she needs.

Wow! that certainly got my attention and now I'm intrigued to know more, much more!

Please don't leave us waiting with our tongues and todgers hanging out!

Good hook but to short needs to be longer and some parts need to be in bold or something because its clear their is a fantasy in here with no real action going in the reality of the story and it just blends with little distinctive writing that it's not really happening until after