All Comments on 'Hidden Acres Ch. 12'

This was really good, and I'd be happy to see more of these four (or five, if their mom gets in on the fun.)

Nice storyline but you could have had them stopping off somewhere quiet on the way home by a lake or a lovers' lane for full sex, including swapping partners. Maybe a rewrite for the last page?

It is great to see that Hidden Acres is back. Now let’s see some family and community sex like in the earlier chapters. So many different stories can come from this. Please keep this story going.

More please. Thanks.

...six decades: never heard 'boiling nuts'. You creative devil

Very good tale, on its own, in fact it needs a second chapter to have it go all the way. 4 stars.

One question, though, what's its tie-in to Hidden Valley? It wasn't even mentioned.

Hawt!

Absolutely no need to apologize for any aspects of this story. Yeah, it is rather sprawling and it might take an equal number of additional chapters to pull it all together (which I am sure most of would quite enjoy). But you are an excellent writer -- better than most -- and I hope that you continue the tale. 5 stars.

Szép sorozat volt. Szeretném tudni mi történt Sandra és az apja között. Az előzmények alapján kellett, hogy basszanak.