All Comments on 'Hidden Secrets'

It always makes me happy to see you have posted a new story. This one didn’t disappoint. Thanks

Though it was a little rushed at the end, this was a very enjoyable story that tied everything up and turned out well. Congrats on that and to you and your wife on the 47 years together noted in your profile. That's a great accomplishment. 5*

A measured walk to a pleasant finale. Not a lot of suspense, but no villains and only modest super heroes. I gave it a 5* rating because I just liked the pace and the people.

Another wonderful story. Thank you for sharing it. Am glad that the hero was a success in his own right rather than a wimp who got lucky with a goddess.

I loved it having lived in Phoenix area for 45 years of my 70 years I knew every place you mentioned. Good story 5 stars.

Give it to me my pet? Did she make him a submissive? Not the genre I was looking for, sorry!