All Comments on 'Hierarchy of Needs'

A classic, glad to see it here! I hope you continue with the uploads here.

Ummm - i read this story years ago.

Or if it wasn't this exact story it was another with the exact same setup - the door, the little room, the filing cabinets ...

Like others have already said, this story seems exactly like another that was posted years ago.

Was this posted somewhere else?

This was was posted somewhere else

For everyone saying that it was posted somewhere else. It was deleted and reposted by the same author, probably because instead of having several different story series containing several different submissions, he has combined the series' into full length stories instead.

This author had a lot of submissions, a lot of different series that I guess he prioritized organization and decided to collapse series into manageable stories.

Like this one was probably a whole series in itself that was condensed into one 7 page story instead of having multiple stories labeled "hierarchy of needs#."

I remember this authors name enough that I can confirm that this is indeed, the same author.

not copied form somewhere else, not someone else trying to steal their work.

The same exact author, unless my memory fails me. The name is kinda unique you know.

I'm sorry, but the whole manipulation thing is a HUGE TURN OFF for me. Changing someone's opinion by presenting facts and data to strengthen your position is one thing because the decision is still left in their hands. But even the premise of swapping papers and file folders to alter their personality against their will is going too far down the rabbit hole. The main character here doesn't truly have any morality because he's remaking every single member of his family into someone else entirely with the single objective of making his sister a sex slave. He loves no one but himself and is a sociopath as well. 1/5

Very nice buildup, I’m sure it takes the author as much restraint as the character!

as much i appreciate the work, i could not stop thinking again & again "what stupid bullsh*, how dump can someone be" in terms of that jerking sump brother.

Good idea, good written - just the storyline and the described carakter of the most stupid men/brother in this world is an totally downturn.

The premise is interesting and the trajectory of the story good but the execution seemed a little tedious. The writing is good but the characters seem a little flat as it all seems to be coming from inside the brother's mind.