by ronde
Fantastic, I love Sinopa, and I love how she and Daniel made a life together. Have we really benefitted with technology, in some ways but in others we have lost the strong connections your characters had.
5 Stars and one more for my favourites.
Cheers, Andy
Comforting. The best word to describe your story, although "beautifully written" and "compelling" are close runners-up. Lordy but you're an outstanding writer!
Lovely romance but a little bitter sweet in that they had 6 children but appears the family died out. What a shame for such a love story. 5⛤👍👍👍👍
What a lovely story. The final comments are very touching and true. Good one, looking out for more. Thanks
Wow. Fine story, I really enjoyed it and I know I will enjoy many readings
Oh what a great narrating. Not only a story. The best I have read on Literotica until today. Thank you.
Great story. Reminded me of the movie ‘Jeremiah Johnson’ with Robert Redford in it. Ole Grizz who hunted grizzlies. Great movie. If you haven’t seen it check it out if you enjoyed this story. You won’t be disappointed.
Extremely well written! A relaxing, realistic look into history, humanity, romance and undying love. Very enjoyable!
Fine and excellent. A well told tale and highly enjoyable. Many thanks for writing it and sharing it with us. 5***+
Remarkable story and I definitely believe it. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Great story very well put together. It was enjoyed n appreciated. Thanks for ur time n hard work.
truly a FINE story. Has to be true for the suffering n survival and human development cannot from cellphone or hollywood movie repros.
In addition to being superb writing, the subject content appears to be historically accurate as well. More stories like this would be eagerly accepted.
Another excellent story. I enjoy the wide range of categories that you set your stories in.
A great story that avoids all the common stereotypes and tropes that are used with ir stories. It being historically accurate helps. The time skip and the third person narration at the end was perfect. WELL DONE!
Excellent Mountain Man story. Enjoyed it immensely. Five stars, and thank you for it.
Well-written, with an excellent plot, and great characters. It also contained a lot of accurate detail and brought history to the forefront. A really good love story between a man and a woman that demonstrates the insignificance of ethnicity or race.
As a young man, I spent time with Salish and Yakima tribes. This is a story that some of them may have told. I found all their stories had meaning and carried a sense of history.
I loved this story. I can believe it.
"In this day and time, a little hope means a lot" How timely and profound!
Having fished for trout in nameless streams flowing from the Salish Mountains, where grizzly bears are plentiful, I could not help but love this story....CINCO ESTRELLAS!
It sounds more believable than Hollywood's story about 'Jeremiah Johnson. An outcast and a wilderness trapper, a mutual aid relationship. Divine love and survival.
Not sure how he would have been able to care for his horses with no winter shelter and no hay or other forage for them to eat. Horses might not have needed a barn, but would certainly have needed a LOT of nutritious feed-hay and grain-to survive winter in the mountains. If he's living in dense forest, that's a big problem this story does not address.
Your prose style is seemingly effortless, but in reality, I suspect it's because of your scrupulous
attention to detail. Your dialogue is entirely apropos, while your descriptions of those perilous times smacks of authenticity. Faultless and faultless.
Every time I read this story I am very moved. To save a stranger, one whom may not appreciate it, and yet still doing so. Both characters.
A story to cherish.
Thank you for creating a wonderful story. It could be made into a movie. 5 stars