by BrattyTease
A little over the top, but not so much as to be implausible. I especially liked the insight into Heather's thought process and motivation. Getting to share what's going on inside someone's head is what makes erotica so much hotter than porn in my opinion. I hope you write more.
One of my all-time favourite experiences of yours, and retold with the perfect balance of smile and sizzle, too.
Innocence getting herself into trouble yet again - that's my girl ;)
Loved it. Heather is clearly a wonderful, perfect little slut. Well written, extremely hot!