All Comments on 'High School Beautiful Ch. 02'

stories that pretend that the Reader was a participant, especially when they keep slipping from 'first' person to 'third' and back again.

If you don't like first person stories my work is probably not for you.

Good, follow up for 1st ch.made for a good read, but, I thought if maybe you had the daughter come in and catch them fucking it would become a 3 some. there are stories of the same type out there where girls fuck teachers for good grades, you could add more to make the story different from the others like I mentioned a 3 some and maybe a little girl on girl action, just a thought, keep on writing.

Just seemed lame, hard to put my finger on it. Might have been all the switching up from first to third view or maybe how the flow from daughter being aggressive to being sub

Just didn't flow