All Comments on 'High School Harem Ch. 05'

i understand not knowing about sex,but have him acting stupid is another thing.

This series is fantastic! And very very sexy! Keep up the great work,

I always am anxious to see if you've posted another story. Keep them cumming!! ;)

But wise him up, so he doesn't seem to be just a fuck boy toy.

Not totally steered by this purple knob.

That was another great Chapter with Rick learning how to have fun with his enormous Dick. I like how Angie was introduced to the story along with adding the other three girls at the start of the story. Lisa still the ring leader as a teacher basically setting Rick up with the girls. I can hardly wait for the next chapter with the five of them. You are getting better.

Keep the story cumming!!!

This is one of the best series I have ever read on Literotica. I eagerly await each new chapter.I hope you continue it for a long lomg time. Comgrats on all the good work.

Please stay true to your initial premise that Rick is a shy kid that gets tense when trying to interact with girls. Most guys can relate to that concept. He is not a moron, just clueless. If he continues to get dumber this story line will become tired and boring. I think your skills are above that.

quite a good story, looking forward for more.

always a problem in such storys to stay at a level where it ist still reasonable or realitic, that no one finds out.

so maybe some Problems would be a nice turn

is a BIG disadvantage of this story. Hey, it was fun in first and second chapters, but now the Reader wants improvement. A big one. At this rate, he will stay only as a human vibrator.

3/5

I agree with last comment, Rick is just too slow in the brain box. Even with his obvious attraction to the ladies, his thought process speed is dragging the whole story down.

but 3 Anals, 6 pussy's (one virgin I'm assuming with blood), no lubrication or condoms in use as of yet. YEP; all of these people are doomed to be disease ridden HOs or a glorified dildo (since Rick doesn't have a brain).

Don't get me wrong; I like this screwball comedy of erotic errors, but just how in the hell does Rick think he's going to find a "real GF" when he's fucking 5 complete sluts (and 2 more coming up)? Beth was the only decent one among em. Yep; introduce Mom to any of the rest of em and tell her about their past!

I'm still hoping that Sheri wins; but now I think that she's too good for him!

Thanks;

DKP

Love the plotline but agree with the kids; the boy needs to graduate from being dumber than a rock! ...also if I never see the word 'funbags' again Id be a happy camper!

Rick really needs to be made smarter.......otherwise it makes an awesome story boring as hell

Very hot story but by now Rick should have grown a pair and become more confident or assertive.

Keep up the good work!

God I was hard all through that story in anticipation. You must keep going.

You really need to lose that "midget's arm" description. It does not lead to a pleasant mental image, in fact, it's kinda gross.

Other than that, I'm still really enjoying the story.

I like this story but the continuing aspect of His intelligence is really offputting. He should be coming into his own by now with the number of girls he's had. I mean anyone who is doing his teacher for a month should be fairly confident and comfortable when dealing with girls. Other than that I love the series.

I think you meant Kim Witt.

A DELIGHTFUL fantasy of an early sex life; written from the man's perspective. Just WONDERFUL!

She was the one that was supposed to hook up with him after school, but Lisa held him after school and he missed hooking up with her

Still loving it ! Keep em coming :-) I know it doesn't fit with the story, but it would be cool if Rick got fed up with Blake and kicked his ass so he would leave him alone. I loathe bullies.

Can't get any better keep writing

Of course you are getting better. Best so far, though all have been 5's.

Oh Please...there is NO Progression in this story. He's just a dumb lucky bastard. As fapping reading why go past the first two chapters. Give the hero a chance to grow a brain for F*cks sake! Boring...I think I'll go read a different "writer"

It is exhausting, the number of Lit writers that portray 18 years old males as 12 year old's. i also lose interest in very good stories when they dumb down the males, other wise i enjoy this story.

"Angie cooed and calmed the shuddering teen"

Should be Lisa.

Agree with these other comments. I wonder if kids writing stories. Plus the fact that Lisa has been teaching him for a month and he still don’t know what the hell is going on just doesn’t make sense. If you want to keep him being shy I guess it’s fine. When they have to spell out every hint it’s irritating. No one can be that slow. Huh? Huh? Huh? I guess that’s why we don’t get repeats with any of the girls.

What the hell is with this good plot but dumb mc?I’m dropping this. Stop making the 18yo/a like some sorta braindead pussy that can’t think for nuts.

Okay...five stars for the story...

However, and I say this knowing the series has been written...WHY is Rick still so vapid?? He is WWAAYYYY too slow on the uptake in most (if not all) of the situations he is presented with. He OBVIOUSLY thinks about what 'could' happen, his fantasies, etc...he just locks up too much.

What he needs is confrontation with Brett...get some of that testosterone out by taking out the bully and his two goons...plus, that would up his social position that much more.

Well, one more chapter...lets see how this goes...😀😈🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠

Very good storey!!!

Same old thing, just getting raunchier each time - too easy, no conflicts other than the insipid MC and the jock, same old...