by Cagivagurl
Damn it, CG! You made me look up words I either didn't know or was unsure of (writers like it when this happens), you brought a tale of love and lust after 40 and then you brought tears to my eyes.
Well done. 5* all the way.
Great, well written piece of work. Got to take some time now looking up some new words. I also enjoy that. Thank you very much for your efforts.
Another romantic tale from CG. Well written and emotional. Nicely done.
Dope-ass story, Cagivagurl. This meant a lot to me on a personal level. Anything less than five stars was never an option. Left me crying. Happy tears. Randi.
I am laughing at your intro. "Never bet with Randi." You are discovering what some of us have known for years. That little birdie told me "This is a must read." God, I am now a wreck. Those two little girls. I don't know if you are aware of how much that warmed my heart. All the stars for this one.
Maybe Cagivagurl’s best story yet. Theo knew who he wanted and he went after her, good for him for not being a coward.
Simply a delightfully romantic storyline around two real, relatable characters — start to finish. Feel certain you enjoyed writing this piece — wait, surely true of all you pieces no matter the storyline and characters. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
When I saw the authors name, I knew it was a must read. Good build up of the characters, lots of twists, and the final twist, the girls, yep, I made a wise decision reading this story. 5* because that's all they would let me give. Thanks for the great read.
A well-crafted yarn that started out with lust and morphed into love. Awesome piece of writing.
Hooked
Not at all what I expected from Cagivgurl. Simply & completely your best story yet. Amazing - 6 stars!
This is one of the best stories I have read on this site in the last 18 years I have been reading here.
It could be a Netflix movie with a bit of festive coupling, or leave out the sex and it is a Hallmark movie.
Great writing.
Wonderful story. Not the standard erotic adventure but a clear love story on many dimensions. Kudos.
By the end of the first page I was positive I'd never see a less likeable pair of main characters. By the end of page seven, I was amazed by the depth you had given these characters, and how much I enjoyed them. Thank you.
Even a resolutely childfree curmudgeon like me can appreciate this story. One of the half-dozen or so best that I’ve seen on Lit. Easy 5 stars.
What a sweet and romantic story. Great read. I will read your stories wherever you post.
Perfect! Complete work that captures all the things that make us worthy of redemption. 5*
Really nice story, thank you so much. Ending is a bit soft but the rest of the story is riveting, I could not put it down.
Theo didn't ring true at beginning
Kept insulting and although not totally ignored too much was allowed Been in corporate life over 50 years. Big, medium,and small. Profit and non profit. He would have alienated too many people in beginning.
Wow, great story! I've read pretty much everything you have posted here and like a lot of it. This one is quite a bit different almost to the point that I would never have guessed it was authored by the same person as your LW stories. I almost didn't read it because of the category. I'm glad I didn't skip it, I should obviously start considering Mature as a place to look for Romance stories :-)
Another great story had us slowly crying after page three,truly glad about the marriage finding the girls and having been able to have a strong marriage. Thanks for writing your stories sweetheart we love you very much.
This is a reread for me. And it is still one of the best stories on the site. One thing I have come to realize, dagnabit I just don’t like Theo
Wonderful story, 10 stars! Sage found out the true meaning of life, she found true love, married him, and found her babies. She has a wonderful role now-wife and mother...