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Click hereThen they heard the sound of movement and a quiet voice from inside the bedroom as Nessa stirred. Mike flashed Jane a quick, impish half-grin as he shoved her underwear into his pocket, then took a step backwards towards the bedroom.
"Sounds like I'm needed. See you Monday," he said with a nod toward the front door, then turned and hurried to the bedroom, leaving Jane standing alone in the doorway topless, aroused and confused.
- COMMENTS
Dry_opinionover 5 years agoThe unconvincing curse from "... an old woman. The aunt of a guy I was seeing ..." is ludicrous. Real aunt would more likely use a curse, which will benefit her nephew and not just punish the girl.
Apart from that the plot is very interesting and characters are developed nicely. The combination of desperation, lust and scheming in the main character is a wonderful psychological portrait. All the motives are well explained and relatable. Very well done sir.
AspernEsslingover 5 years agoIt's a very unusual scenario, but I'm curious. I very much like that you didn't reveal her original betrayal right away.
cantgetenough2almost 6 years agoWhile the premise should have been a bit far fetched, it was totally believable.
And the characters were relatable, understandable, and honest.
Thank you for this story
Horseman68over 6 years agoAnother interesting beginning from this talented eclectic author. 🙂
Prolifieralmost 7 years agoI am not making an overstatement North. You really have the abilities of a great literateur. Would it be improper to ask for a small correction on page 2? The followup meeting was supposed to be on friday and not wednesday. Its too insignificant but then perfect pieces of work should remain unblemished.
