by Luckie_Duckie
strangle! Anywho, glad to see you back Luckie! Missed ya! Keep writing, you're great at it.
This is an amazing story!!! I absolutely love it, but you have a few grammer problems, you might want to check some of your word usage.
Brilliant story, really, but please please please learn when to put "your" and "you're". If I read that one more time I'll go mad!
Haha
Very enjoyable nonetheless.