All Comments on 'Highway Patrol's Lucky Night Pt. 03'

by ibjtjones

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Boring

This started out so well with some great sex. However the plot soon became boring and repetitive the whole story should be rewritten and condensed to about 4 pages hopefully with a natural development and no repeats. Could be a very good story .

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