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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Horrible grammar

“You’s eyes...she scoffed...”

This kind of garbage multiple times. I couldn’t read any further. It hurt my eyes.

SolitaryVicesSolitaryVicesover 3 years agoAuthor

that's her name dude LOL

it's a romanized Japanese name. i could have done "Yō" but decided "You" looked less odd and also served as a thematic double entendre.

peter4870peter4870over 1 year ago

What a wonderful moving story! Very moving.

Took me a bit to realise her name is "You", but so what.

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