by Ed Rogers
great so far please keep writing ,i was expecting mum to show up at any time
...please keep this story cumming. As an older ex-Hippie with fond memories of naked summers, I can relive some of my escapades through your writing. That was back in the late 60s and early 70s.
Your devoted reader wishes to encourage you to continue this lovely tale.
I loved it - and I see many directions you could take this story - all of them good.
great story so far.. cant wait to see mom involved if possible.
and paced it a tad slower rather than try to fit so much in so short a story. It would have left lots of room to branch out and explore.
oh well.
Surely an obvious continuance is, after many more experiences at Hippie Hills, he returns home to Mom. She would have known what he was to experience, so now can enjoy him as an experienced lover while Dad is away on active duty.
Great start that definitely needs to continue and I agree with a previous poster that he needs to get "very experienced" and take good care of Wobbly especially so that Wobbly will tell Mom how much pleasure he can deliver!!
I have a friend who lived in a hippie type commune and she has told me similar stories of free love and wanton sex. Wish I had been a part of it.
Ending was rushed, and I personally am not into sloppy seconds. But it has great potential and I'm looking forward to reading about the rest of the adventure. More chapters please!
would love to hear more of this story. i would especially like to know about the nicknames like lips.
Please post part two. I liked the mutual masturbation in the canoe very much#
A wish this place was real and I could visit these totally free "Hippies".
He should breed Bean in one chapter and move in with his aunt in another chapter. Introduce anal in another chapter.