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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Oh my God

What the FUCK???

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Good story man

Stuff like this is awsume great twist on a classic consept with the gender change at the end.Good work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
oh to be a girl

This was a really good read. I would have liked to seen a description of the mother as a hot milf that the boy secretly lusted after; maybe some secret panty licking from him. At the end I would have liked some lesbian sexplay between the mother and baby sitter. Maybe the mother arrives home wearing a strap on under her pantsuit slacks and with a new butch haircut. Maybe she could feed the babysitter her scat to contribute to the nourishment of the pregnancy. I too thought the gender change was cool at the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Love it

I loved the story, just a bit sad about so sudden ending. Great job!

Calli06Calli06almost 4 years ago

Lovely tale. A good start, if you wish to refine your thoughts about the wonder of unbirth...

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