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Thank you for sharing your outstanding talent with Literotica readers! Your exposition of the feelings and needs of a submissive is spot on (I know from personal experience). The ability of a submissive to relinquish everything to one known only through his dominance is not something everyone has or will or should experience, but since I have experienced it, I know how accurate your account is, and I appreciate your attention to detail. Please avail yourself of the free editorial services Literotica offers; there are some errors that distract from the story, and it deserves the readers' full attention. Thanks for sharing your talent!

A very well written story, I thoroughly enjoyed it! You created a perfect mystery of a mood, and your writing submersed me in the story, I nearly forgot I was in my living room. Great story!